Mostly OK
Apr16
This chapter’s title is Pig Icarus and I thought that it could have been a spoiler, so I the tag for this is chapter 5. I guess it’s also me finally settling on whether they’re “Chapters” or “issues”
ALSO the next few pages are all built around you not being able to see what his injury looks like. Not because I didn’t want you to see it because it’s gross, but because I didn’t want to draw it because it’s gross.
I was wondering about why we hadn’t seen the rest of Spry lately. It makes total sense, but I have to admit it threw me off in the last two panels of the previous page. I couldnt tell if Spry was on the ground, standing, or how Lori was oriented relative to him.
That said, this is a shocking development in the story! I really didn’t expect it and I’m excited to see how it goes from here on out. Thanks as always for sharing your comic.