Did you know this comic actually had someone go through and edit it? Not very heavily, just a few notes of what did and didn’t work. Kirsten, my editor and in no small way the reason I’m willing to be public with my drawings, suggested that the second panel of this comic be expanded. I like this page a lot, and I’m glad I took her suggestion instead of handwaving it off like I did a few others things that would eventually be explained visually. There’s another joke in a few pages that was changed because she just straight-up said it wasn’t funny (she was right).